TRIP TOLIMA
1/31/2016
Dear Diary,
Every year, the entire group has a trip visiting touristic places in Colombia. This year the school and Zambo (the company) decided that we were going to Tolima. I’m very excited because a love spending time with my friends and having fun together. On the other hand, I don’t like the place we are going. It is too hot, there are a lot of mosquitos, and the town it is not so pretty . I was thinking about the trip and I don’t care where we are going, I only want to have fun with my friends.
In two days I’m leaving for the trip and have not packed anything. I need to buy two long-sleeves shirts, repellent, boots, and other stuff. I also need to buy some pills, personal stuff, and Oreo cookies for the trip. We are only staying three days. In those three days we are going swimming, fishing, walking, and climbing.
We are going to have so much fun, I’m so excited and I hope mosquitos don’t bite me.
Love You,
Valeria
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Dear Diary,
Every year, the entire group has a trip visiting touristic places in Colombia. This year the school and Zambo (the company) decided that we were going to Tolima. I’m very excited because a love spending time with my friends and having fun together. On the other hand, I don’t like the place we are going. It is too hot, there are a lot of mosquitos, and the town it is not so pretty . I was thinking about the trip and I don’t care where we are going, I only want to have fun with my friends.
In two days I’m leaving for the trip and have not packed anything. I need to buy two long-sleeves shirts, repellent, boots, and other stuff. I also need to buy some pills, personal stuff, and Oreo cookies for the trip. We are only staying three days. In those three days we are going swimming, fishing, walking, and climbing.
We are going to have so much fun, I’m so excited and I hope mosquitos don’t bite me.
Love You,
Valeria
**The sentences highlighted in red are those that use commas in series.**